2 Strengths:
-I think my ordinary world description was pretty good. I tried to describe the context of the journey and provide a small introduction to the setting that the story was going to take place at.
- I also liked the section where I described the setting once the hero conquered the unknown and once the goal was reached. I think it was well described and the hero's feelings were described profoundly.
2 Weaknesses:
- I need to work on the transitions in general throughout the paper, making better connections in between ideas and paragraphs.
- Some of my sections need some more development and elaboration.
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